Evan, Did you camp out to see the new Star wars flick?
Star Wars movies are very cool but why would you see them ten times? Aren't you likely to catch more flaws that way? Like me, I seen Episode II Attack of the Clones on TV, this past weekend. You know that part in the stadium where the Jedi were fighting against the beasts but then all these things came rolling out? All the Jedis were fighting them which is great idea but they could of made that battle alot better, especially the fighters were all scrawny robots that couldn't scare a fly. The rest of the movie was alright

There! Sentences are corrected gels